Revising/Editing 2 - Wagoner
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by Mitchell Wagoner
| 9 Questions
1
1
What change, if any, needs to be made to sentence 2?
Insert them after spends
Change her to their
Change told to telling
Make no change.
2
1
What change needs to be made to sentence 4?
Change appreciate to appreshiate
Delete the comma after shelter
Change easy to easily
No change is needed.
3
1
What change, if any, should be made in setence 7?
Change Great Depression to great depression
Delete the comma after Depression
Insert a comma after history
Make no change.
4
1
What is the best way to rewrite sentences 12 and 13?
Even though life was hard and many people felt desperate, Grandma's family discovered a secret.
Even though life was hard, many people felt desperate, Grandma's family discovered a secret.
Even though life was hard, and many people felt desperate, and Grandma's family discovered a secret.
Correct as is.
5
1
What change needs to be made in sentence 15?
Change dad to Dad
Insert a comma after ways
Delete no
Make no change
6
1
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 17?
Delete the comma after gifts
Change exchanged to exchanging
Change each other to one another
Make no change.
7
1
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 19?
Change favorite to favoritest
Change memorys to memories
Change when to which
Make no change
8
1
What is the best change to make in sentence 22?
Change knew to new
Change grandma to Grandma
Change they to it
Insert a comma and quotation marks before that
9
1
What change needs to be made in sentence 23?
Change She to And
Change sustained to sustaned
Change through to threw
Change nations' to nation's
Add to my formatives list

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