STAAR Revising & Editing Practice #1
By DAWN THOMAS
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4 Questions

What is the most effective transition to add to the beginning of sentence 6?
What is the most effective transition to add to the beginning of sentence 6?
Kelly wants to add a more effective transition between the second paragraph (sentences 4-11) and the third paragraph (sentences 12-14). Which of the following sentences should be added before sentence 12 to help readers effectively transition from the second to third paragraph?
Kelly wants to add a more effective transition between the second paragraph (sentences 4-11) and the third paragraph (sentences 12-14). Which of the following sentences should be added before sentence 12 to help readers effectively transition from the second to third paragraph?
Kelly has not used the most appropriate word in sentence 17. Which word best replaces changes?
Kelly has not used the most appropriate word in sentence 17. Which word best replaces changes?

Kelly wants to end her essay with a call to action. Which sentence should she add after sentence 21 to best achieve this goal?
Kelly wants to end her essay with a call to action. Which sentence should she add after sentence 21 to best achieve this goal?